Today I was learning about a time when someone was mean to me.
My new learning was writing about a story about when, someone was mean to me.
I enjoyed highlighting the words.
I found it challenging to lots and lots of writing.
Next time I would put more, adjectives in my writing.
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Kia ora. I am Lance from St Mary’s school.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how he changed in the end.
Do you play soccer like his old gang?
Looking forward to your response.
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Kia ora Lance I am Santino from St Mary's School thank you for looking at my Blog
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